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Happy Father's day to all the men in this world
Ok now I know I have not been on Deviantart art for a while now, but I have gotten a little bored of deviantart Fables, stories, tales and myths, and even the oldest legends, tell of a strong faithful man, who held the whole world in his hands. Able, funny, cool and kind, a man unlike any other, his will moves the mountains high, and his smile brings the sun to shine. Truthful, trusting, brave and bold, a man to rise above all else, his love beats that of others, his strength of mind saves those in doubt. Honest, sincere, strong and warm, he is a cut above the rest, his thoughts lead the nations first, his actions make the world seem best. Eager, happy, nice and true, he'll be a wall to all things bad, his hope is a ray of light, his judgment has made things alright. Rare to find is such a man, i simply call him my dad. No reff I hope you guys like it Got the poem from here --------> [link] Comments
Oh I have missed your art so much!
You might wanna mention that you got the poem from here: [link] -- «Ah, the bridle: Essential if you own a horse, sort of kinky if you don't.» Don't be an idiot like them! They'll drag you down to their level and beat you with experience! Oh I have missed your art so much!
You might wanna mention that you got the poem from here: [link] -- «Ah, the bridle: Essential if you own a horse, sort of kinky if you don't.» Don't be an idiot like them! They'll drag you down to their level and beat you with experience! Aww
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Critiques
But to me, it looks like =leadmare's style. Alot like her style.
So maybe next time try your own style?
I will critique this anyways though...
Fisrt off, the stallions muzzle is very large, and the top part goes very high, I would bring it down a bit. Also, the stallions right front leg... the knee is very high, so maybe bring that down a bit.
The foal looks alright for the most part... But you can see his "butt hole" Sticks out a bit far. They are not usually like that. (Unless they are taking a dump)
All and all, this is an okay picture.
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